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Make: HP
Model: HP pstc5100
Date Picture Taken: Apr 14, 2008, 9:48:57 PM
Artist's Comments
This is Sea Princess Azuri and her would-be fiance. I really like this manga, I just wish it would have gotten it's third volume as promised. Instead the ending seemed a bit...haulted. But I love the characters and the main plot, so Yay for Sea Princess Azuri! I have yet to find myself a copy of the first volume though... *searches* The original's a bit large, I had it downsized at Kinkos, but anyone interested in the original let me know, ok? Fanart by me Original story and art by:
Ouu X3 Why....are they chained together? Ish teh girl unhappy? Anyway, I really like the guy's tail X3 Buuut maybe things like the background need a little more depth? The kelp, for one, seems sorta flat, as it's the only thing without shadows in the picture. X3; Also, you might want to elaborate on the black hole/ cave/ ocean??? behind them a little more....there's not a lot of transition between the color and straight black, so it's hard to tell what it's supposed to be like. As for the characters~..... I like them, lol. I can't really critique them because I don't know much about dolphin/eel anatomy or anything X3;;
My internet won't let me see that deviant's page! I remember seeing it a long time ago and thinking that gallery was quite amazing. Nice fan art, it looks like a cute story. I love the girl's expression, and you're so good with water colors!
Devious Comments
Anyway, I really like the guy's tail X3
Buuut maybe things like the background need a little more depth? The kelp, for one, seems sorta flat, as it's the only thing without shadows in the picture. X3;
Also, you might want to elaborate on the black hole/ cave/ ocean??? behind them a little more....there's not a lot of transition between the color and straight black, so it's hard to tell what it's supposed to be like.
As for the characters~..... I like them, lol. I can't really critique them because I don't know much about dolphin/eel anatomy or anything X3;;
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the only critique that I can find is the background, it's a bit plain
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... look at 'em go......
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Thanks for the critique~ Next time I'll use a reference for ocean scenery.
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Death is not the greatest loss in life. The greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live.- Norman Cousins
I check DA every Monday
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Yeah......That.
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... look at 'em go......
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Celestial Violence
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Death is not the greatest loss in life. The greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live.- Norman Cousins
I check DA every Monday
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